With fear and trembling, I loose the first chapter of my book-in-progress into the world (for now...it might disappear at some point). Here's the download for you to peruse.
If you like it, great! Affirm my creative efforts and tell me (gently) how it could be better.
If you don't like it, don't tell me (unless you have ideas on how it could be better, and then...gently). I'm a very fragile bean.